The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
The pie chart and line graph illustrate how many bottles coca-cola sold in the year 2000 and the share prices from 1996 to 2001
overall , from the pie chart , the proportion of sales in north amrica is highest while that in Africa and Middle east was lowest. From the line graph , although there was a fluctuation in share prices , it increased after 5 years.
As can be seen from the pie chart ,30 percent of the bottles consumed in North America was the highest which also was around 4 times higher than that percentage in Africa and middle east.The dates for the number of bottles in Latin America and Europe were similar with 25 and 20 percent respective, Coca-cola witnessed 16 percent of the bottle sold in asia.
Looking to line graph, the share prices started at about 34 billion dollars and ended at nearly 60 billion dollars . There was a upward trend of nearly 50 percent from 1996 to 1998. After reached a peak at slightly 75 percent , the share prices saw a downward trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59659090909 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24843462835 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.319874933 43.030603864 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241773467333 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116968256765 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728127778951 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15742953789 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653994846434 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.