The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
According to the both bar and table, the highest number of hospital beds is recorded from Japan, while Japanese government has only spent less money for health and medical care. Moreover, the other countries show a fluctuated set of criteria for the data.
Let's look at the first bar chart which the number of sharing hospital beds is 14 thousand from Japan. As seen, Germany and Netherlands come second and third in the next allocation, with at 8 and nearly 5 thousand beds of population. While Australia has a slight point below the Netherlands, this country leads UK, Canada, Spain and USA w...
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Comments
flaws: 1. the essay didn't
flaws:
1. the essay didn't get the main idea of the chart and table. like 'three different official governments have decided to spend a sum of money to life expectancy.'
2. conclusion is wrong.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 210 200
No. of Characters: 1027 1000
No. of Different Words: 132 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.807 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.89 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.555 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.681 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4
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