The chart below give information about travel to and from UK and about the most popular countries for Uk residents to visit Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below give information about travel to and from UK,and about the most popular countries for Uk residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The information in regards to millions of tourists to and from United Kingdom, and about the more eminent nations for UK denizens to travel is, depicted by linear and a bar graph representation.
Overall, it is crystal clear that travellers visits other countries by UK inhabitants were higher than the visitors from the overseas countries in the UK, while the sightseers from France holds the dominant position over the time period.

It is evident from the given data the visitors of United Kingdom visited to other Nations from 1979 to 1999 increased dramatically, which reached at peak point to almost 50 millions. Whereas visits to the UK by foreign residents stood at only approximately 10 millions from 1979 till 1984. Moreover, between 1984 and 1999 tourists from other countries inclined suddenly, to nearly 20 millions in last year.

Probing ahead, in 1999, the value of England citizens who visited in Turkey decreased drastically, which registered to merely 3 millions, followed by Greece and America upsurged steadly to almost 4 and 5 millions respectively. In addition to this, there was 2 millions disparity observed between the travellers of Spain and France who came from UK.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
The information in regards to millions of tourists to and from United...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd a bar graph representation. Overall, it is crystal clear that travellers visi...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed at peak point to almost 50 millions. Whereas visits to the UK by foreign residents ...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as visits to the UK by foreign residents stood at only approximately 10 millions ...
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Line 6, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to this, there was 2 millions disparity observed between the travellers of Spain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18041237113 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80443164622 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2357706526 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233405910323 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109426858073 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681746345701 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148882238756 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557094947258 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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