The information about the number of people those yearly attend Grandville Stadium for taking part in three events different from 2017 to present year is illustrated by the given bar graph, as well as forecast of future attendance after making change in 2019.
Overall, it is crystal clear that the attendance figures at Grandville stadium was raised in all events and it will continue in future. Where sporting events were recorded maximum in all given year.
At the first glance, it can be clearly seen from graph that in 2017, attendance of individuals in sports at Grandville Stadium was registered the highest figure that account by 150,000. It was followed by the concerts, having proposition of quarter. However, attendance in theater was the lowest. In present, all events in Grandville stadium was increased by small number.
Moving further, it is predicted that in 2030 attendance in theater will incline slightly which will be reached at 50,000. Whereas, sporting event will show incline of almost same amount as it in past years. Surprisingly, attendance in concerts will be rapidly gown-up more than 100,000 in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this yearly' or 'those yearlies'?
Suggestion: this yearly; those yearlies
... information about the number of people those yearly attend Grandville Stadium for taking pa...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ised in all events and it will continue in future. Where sporting events were recorded ma...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... events and it will continue in future. Where sporting events were recorded maximum i...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ll be rapidly gown-up more than 100,000 in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65689174112 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6047921488 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19484589705 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725792684789 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636993835524 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121361616323 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463812410167 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.