A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the information about both the people who dying and born in switzerland between 1970 and 2020. The information was given by United National. The amout of the rates in millions.
Overall, the people who born in Switzerland was the higher than death people troughtout the entire period. While the born people was a significant increase and death people was fluctuate.
Looking for the detail, between 1970 and 1980 the rate of the birth was about 1,2 millions people and increased dramatically by 2 millions in three decades.
By contrast, the people who dying in Switzerland in 1970 was 0,9 millions and climb up to reach a peak at 1,4 millions before plummenting to 0,8 millions people at the end of period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89147286822 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66583275225 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6511058419 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147195711204 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879954007909 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584624733597 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107241718946 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869323847766 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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