The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups went to gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant

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The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups went to gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by vinh2907 on Mon, 11/14/2022 - 11:40

The line chart illustrates the proportion of European people of various age groups went to gym once a month or more from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the proportion of people visiting to gym for all 4 age groups over the given period. In addition, the data for people from 18 to 24 years old rose most dramatically, Whereas the figure for people 45 and over always was lowest for most of the period.
The figure for people from 18 to 24 years old experienced a dramatic rise, increasing from approximately 10% to 60% in the first 16 years and then remained stable at this level at the end of the period. Similarly, the data for people from 25 to 34 rose remarkably from below 10% to 50% over the given period.
Experiencing a similar trend, the figure for people from 35 to 44 years old increased from approximately 5% to 10% in the first 4 years, then remained the same for the next four years, and rose slightly to about 20% in 2002. From 2002 to 2006, the data for this age group remained stable at 20% and increased significantly to below 50% at the end of the period. Likewise, The data for people from 45 and over was approximately 5% remained stable in the 4 years, then rose slightly to around 10% in 1998 then remained at this level in the last 8 years and grew significantly to nearly 20% in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mained the same for the next four years, and rose slightly to about 20% in 2002. ...
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...then rose slightly to around 10% in 1998 then remained at this level in the last ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, similarly, then, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3625498008 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52442552722 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398406374502 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0156224577 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114327102849 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850514351497 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111694082883 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131489216236 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139623420177 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mained the same for the next four years, and rose slightly to about 20% in 2002. ...
^^
Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...then rose slightly to around 10% in 1998 then remained at this level in the last ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, similarly, then, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3625498008 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52442552722 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398406374502 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0156224577 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114327102849 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850514351497 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111694082883 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131489216236 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139623420177 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.