The bar chart provides data about Someland’s top exports in 2005 and 2015 and future prospects to the year 2025. Units are measured in United States dollar billion.
Overall, the highest amount of money was gained by exportation of dairy products in 2015, although international tourism is expected to reach the same revenue in 2025, whereas meat industry had the lowest income in 2015, which is forecast to be even lower in 2025.
As the chart suggests, meat products contributed to Someland's profits with 4,000,000,000 dollar in 2005 but this figure reduced by five hundred million in the following ten years and further decrease of the same quantity is projected in 2025. Conversely, an upward trend is shown by exports of international tourism, which were just over 6 billion and almost 7 billion respectively in 2005 and 2015 and are forecast to rise by another 1 billion in 2025.
In terms of dairy products, these goods had shown a considerable increase in profits passing from approximately 5 billion in 2005 to 8 billion by 2015 but they will probably drop slightly by less than an half billion in 2025.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ts are measured in United States dollar billion. Overall, the highest amount of mone...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ill probably drop slightly by less than an half billion in 2025.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79936684743 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6029467386 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175933040875 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09724866811 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883259308041 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116830594214 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603557798912 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.