the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,2018 and 2025. summarise.
The bar chart shows main exports of Southland in 2000, 2018 and 2025. International tourism gradually increased and is expected to follow this pattern until 2025. Dairy products has grown sharply since 2000 but a small reduction is predicted. Moreover,meat products have decreased slightly from 2000 to 2018 and as the data suggests will keep decreasing until 2025.
Meat products had the lowest amount of exportation to this year and is expected to keep its place in 2025. Furthermore, international tourism had the most number of exports in 2000 with more than 8 million but now is overthrown by diary products with 1 million difference( international tourism has grown to 9 million but diary products have had more significant increasing. It is expected that International tourism will take back its place as the first source of export in 2025 by reaching to 10 million and small reduction in diary products number is most likely to happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , meat
...a small reduction is predicted. Moreover,meat products have decreased slightly from 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8574791997 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4576208611 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190242225827 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125868768005 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149218675789 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176845856895 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980747722725 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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