The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
According the graph about Global hybrid vehicle sales from year 2006 to 2009 shows us the number of their sales very clearly.
It is easy to realize that US has the highest sales of hybrid vehicles among Japan and other country from 2006 to 2008 around 300,000 of sales. However the amount of sales of US trends to decrease lightly from 2007 to 2009.
Through the chart, we can see the increasing of the number of sales of Japan.
From year 2006 to 2008, Japanese people do not use many hybrid fuel and electricity transportation which is around 50,000 to 100,000 of sales. Otherwise, It is dramatically increase from nearly 100,000 sales to nearly 350,000 from 2008 to 2009 which is the highest sales among US and other. It illustrates that the Japanese citizen start using vehicles more than other.
In general, from year 2006 to 2009 the total sales from 360,000 to 740,000 which means all the countries from the chart trends to use hybrid vehicles much more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...m 2006 to 2008 around 300,000 of sales. However the amount of sales of US trends to dec...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fuel seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much hybrid fuel', 'a good deal of hybrid fuel'.
Suggestion: much hybrid fuel; a good deal of hybrid fuel
...006 to 2008, Japanese people do not use many hybrid fuel and electricity transportation which is...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...of sales. Otherwise, It is dramatically increase from nearly 100,000 sales to nearly 350...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2598902834 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8840291783 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165189030741 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916016502195 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497828939651 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120112823398 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457386255787 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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