The bar chart illustrate, the expenditure of France and UK on consumption of goods like car, computers, Books, Perfume, Cameras in the year 2010.
Overall, citizens of UK has spend more for purchasing of cars in the year 2010. Moreover they have less expenditure over the goods like computers, Books, Perfume, Cameras. In case of France, this country has more expenditure over cars as that of UK. Computer, Books, Perfume and Cameras are likely to have less expenditure during the year 2010.
According to the study of expenditure of two countries namely UK and France. UK has a drastic increase in expenditure of 450,000 pounds over cars but France has only 400,000 pounds in the year 2010. Meanwhile, the expenditure of France consuming computers has significant rise of 370,000 pounds. Whereas, UK has only 350,000 pounds expenditure. Subsequently, UK has higher expenditure of 400,000 over books, meanwhile France has 300,000 pounds expenditure. When it comes to Perfume France has slight increase of 200,000 pounds expenditure than UK only has expenditure of 130,000 pounds. Expenditure made by UK over cameras are significantly increased to 350,000 pounds for the year 2010 but in France it is lowered to 150,000 pounds.
Therefore the study displays that the UK is having more expenditure strength over specified goods than France
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...year 2010. Overall, citizens of UK has spend more for purchasing of cars in the year...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...or purchasing of cars in the year 2010. Moreover they have less expenditure over the goo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rance it is lowered to 150,000 pounds. Therefore the study displays that the UK is havin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23720930233 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87214480699 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446511627907 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.694444362 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6153846154 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215588179028 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102654915092 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567052579396 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153475743887 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379441213257 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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