The chart below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market
(IELTS BOOK 3 TEST 1)
The first bar chart describes the total number of Japanese travelers travel to overseas, between 1985 and 1995. Whereas, the second line graph illustrates the Australia’s share of percentage by Japan’s visitor trade. During the period of ten years. Overall, the both graphs reveal a significant upward trend in the business of travelling.
Firstly, the line chart depicts the yearly report of Japanese travelers; in the initial period (1985) 4millions Japanese tourist travels in a foreign country. However, the annual ratio of Japan’s globetrotter were increasing rapidly by 5 million to 15 millions respectively, between 1986 to 1989. Whereas, after the period of five years in 1991 there was a slight drop in the vacationers by 1%. But, in 1992 and 1993 the number of travels was almost constant by 12millions comprehensively. Further more in 1994 to 1995 the tourist proportion significantly changed and reached at the peak by 16 millions.
Secondly, the Japan’s tourist trade in Australia was immensely influenced in the given period . During 1985 to 1988 the Japanese proportion increased gradually by 2 percent to 4.6 percent. However in 1989 the level of trade moderately plunged by 4.1 percentages approximately. Whereas, in the coming years the share of Japan’s tourism started to soar from 1991 to 1995 comprehensively and eventually reached at the peak by 6.1 percentages.
In short, the two given graphs demonstrate the total contribution of Japanese tourism in a foreign country, and, which was drastically grew every year.
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