The chart below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
The pie chart compares the percentage of various six source, which contributed the energy to a nation in 1985 and 2003.
Overall, it can be seen that, in both year percentage of energy produced by oil dropped significantly in country over the period shown were as percentage of gas increased.
Firstly, the highest proportion of energy had been produced by oil, which was 52% in 1985, it then after slumped significantly to 39% in 2003, while percentage of gas had been rose 10% in 2003.
Secondly, in 1985 the percentage of energy producing went on 22%, although the equivalent figure in 2003 was 17%. The nuclear had same proportion of energy in both year at only 4%
Thirdly, other and coal increased by 3% and 4% respectively in both the years
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Suggestion: sources
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75256209745 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3842064237 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 5.23603664747 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251792526365 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141506687205 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497529733411 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133179619916 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765303072876 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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