The chart below show what UK graduates and post graduates students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the destinations of graduates and post graduates academicians of UK in 2008 who had part-time placements after graduation.
Overall, the relatively similar trend was observed among graduates and post graduates after leaving college. In both cases, the majority of the students were seeking further studies while the minority participated the voluntary works.
Among graduates, the majority of the part time workers did further study (29665) followed by part time work (17,735), unemployment (16235) and voluntary work (3500) while in case of post graduates, the most graduates, just below 30,000, choose further study followed by part-time work by about 25,000. Around 1600 post graduates were unemployed, with minimum participation in voluntary works.
The number of pass-outs in under graduates far outweighed the post graduates in the ratio of 10:1. In addition to that, the difference in students adopting further study and part time work among graduates were higher in comparison to post graduates, however, other sectors depicted the similar trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Among graduates, the majority of the part time workers did further study 29665 followe...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ers did further study 29665 followed by part time work 17,735, unemployment 16235 and vol...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... in students adopting further study and part time work among graduates were higher in com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65030674847 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80673338023 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.318918104 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273770386784 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138144164626 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739291133028 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18902891819 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546759859881 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.