The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The deep analysis of the provided chart reveals information about that the number of leisure hours celebrated by both genders who belong to various employment status.
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that the unemployed people use their free hours most in enjoyment while, full time employed person spent their least of free hours in entertainment.
Looking at the chart in more detail, full time worker did not have time for enjoyment so that 44 hours of the week by male and 38 hours of the week by female spent on enjoyment. In contrast, Part time employed did not have free time while females spent 40 hours of the week to entertainment.
Analyzing further, unemployed and retired people had a similar ratio on enjoyment leisure hours with 84 hours by boys and 78 hours by girls. Whereas, housewives had 50 hours a week to enjoyed and males did not count in this field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...eir free hours most in enjoyment while, full time employed person spent their least of fr...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... Looking at the chart in more detail, full time worker did not have time for enjoyment ...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...female spent on enjoyment. In contrast, Part time employed did not have free time while f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76774193548 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49791588467 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9629438914 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185712991988 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104367795727 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038888510452 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122605174234 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340203153039 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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