In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?
In the world of today, people have become self-dependant so they choose to live alone. This essay will discuss the reason for this situation and explain why this can have both advantages and disadvantages.
To embark on, one reason for this trend is economic. People are more influence than the past so that they can archive what they want after living alone. Something is not always possible to they desire in the past. In addition, lots of responsibility on people's shoulders so they also determine to live independently. For example, countryside people often work in large cities to carry out their family responsibility. Moreover, there are also cultural factors. Nowadays, young people also on presser to merry and think about having a family. Consequently, this couple choose a way of divorce if their marriage life is not happy. Also, development in technology such as social media means people can live alone but they still connected with the world.
I discuss how this situation has a positive or negative impact on society. To the positive side, Individuals learn lots of things when they leave their family for some reason. As they are more likely to live in central locations and they manage their life with unknows peoples and they also do some saving for their family. However, a drawback is that when people live alone then they have experience problem, which is given by their parents and siblings. This lack of social support situation lead to mental health problems then they need public health care services.
To sum up, for the reason mentioned above, it seems to me that number of reasons to happen this situation and, although this has benefits to society as well as negative impact also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5716207 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7606064328 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2352941176 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20554408137 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726400133984 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458536326952 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139496871624 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231311613503 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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