The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is feedback to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
The presentation shows pattenrns of good manufactring and customer feedback. The data shows in diagram format.
At first sight, it can be clearly seen that first stage is raw meterials as wall as manufacred componant. After all meterial and componant store in some place and discuss about producation planning. and it is in depand on design. Next step is assembly all componant same as a desesign And chacking this goods. Testing is also needed for manufactor and check good is same as a design. Next packing stage is rely on market research like which type on packing is complacency in customer. After despatch complete product and put in market for sales. Sales in important roll is market reserch, in addition advertising shows product futures or it help in market research. Product design is also affect on sales. Product reserch is neccesary for finding design.
Overall, Feedback is gretest basis of product manufactor and Chain devlopment process is starts from collection of raw materials and final process is sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...same as a design. Next packing stage is rely on market research like which type on p...
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...advertising shows product futures or it help in market research. Product design is a...
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...market research. Product design is also affect on sales. Product reserch is neccesary ...
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...market research. Product design is also affect on sales. Product reserch is neccesary for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, after all, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68464918934 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2122894093 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4615384615 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143666722456 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474638167056 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543473709159 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119630447797 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561905381822 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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