The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The following chart illustrates how much leisure time which was enjoyed by men and women who had distinctive employment status in 1998-1999.
As can be clearly observed from the chart, five distinct employment status of full-time employed, part-time employed, unemployed, retired, and housewives were surveyed. First of all, females whom were considered as part-time employers or housewives, didn’t have male counterparts. The former group had around 40 hours as leisure time in a week, while the number in latter group was nearly 50 hours.
Turning to other three groups, in both unemployed and retired people, the same pattern was observable. Males had far more leisure time (more then 80 hours) then unemployed or retired females with approximately 70 hours. The story of full-time workers was downright different. Leisure time of males in this group was about 50 hours, which was more than females’ leisure time (less than 40 hours).
Overall, it is clear from the chart that individuals who engaged in full-time jobs had the least amount of leisure time, whether men or women. On the other hand, the maximum amount belonged to retired or unemployed males or females. Housewives and female part-timers were placed between these groups in terms of the amount of leisure time they had in 1998-1999.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e. Males had far more leisure time more then 80 hours then unemployed or retired fem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69666797003 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2166939626 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200955467453 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875163767646 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693604128897 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155620244771 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606975128225 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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