The bar graph illustrates the amount of money spent on six different consumer goods (photographic film, toys, CDs, Perfume, Tennis racquets and personal stereos in four different countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany. Units are measured in thousand pounds sterling.
Overall it can be seen that, Britain spent highest amount of money than other three countries while Germany spent overall least on these goods.
In term of Britain and Germany, people of Britain spend around $175,000 on Photographic film as opposed to French, Italy and Germany, where they spend around $165000, ne...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...taly and Germany. Units are measured in thousand pounds sterling. Overall it can be s...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
... Overall it can be seen that, Britain spent highest amount of money than other three countr...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...her five consumer goods was much higher as compare other countries' expenditu...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...higher than Germany's expenditure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61658031088 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65637920976 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4485017281 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853457031399 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438279188868 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422864384713 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665986357382 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036449919297 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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