The given chart depicts the yearly number of rentals and sales (in different formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
As is observed in the chat, the rentals films have plummeted during the given period of time. However, the DVD sales have shown an overall increase during the same period that was representing the peak value among the various formats of this store sales.
In earlier 2002, the rentals films hit its top level by reaching around 183,000, this value has a significant decline till reach 55,000 of the annual rentals in 2011. in addition to that, the VHS sales have a dramatic slump from approximately 82,000 to 10,000 in 2005. in contrast, the DVD sales have increased gradually in the period between 2002 and 2007. the sales have ceiling from around 45,000 to nearly 210,000 which represented the highest value among all the rentals/sales format.
later in 2007, the blu-ray sales have appeared with a slightly spreading by achieving sales around 1,00 which raised to nearly10,000 in 2011. on the other hand, the DVD sales have declined to 18,000 at the end of the given period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s films have plummeted during the given period of time. However, the DVD sales have shown an o...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...h 55,000 of the annual rentals in 2011. in addition to that, the VHS sales have a ...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...approximately 82,000 to 10,000 in 2005. in contrast, the DVD sales have increased ...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ly in the period between 2002 and 2007. the sales have ceiling from around 45,000 t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Later
... among all the rentals/sales format. later in 2007, the blu-ray sales have appeare...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...als/sales format. later in 2007, the blu-ray sales have appeared with a slightly spr...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...0 which raised to nearly10,000 in 2011. on the other hand, the DVD sales have decl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9057591623 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39467992168 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2422829326 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238439068314 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120962885309 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11215990223 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192117605901 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140093257126 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.