The chart below shows the annual pay thousands of US dollars for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

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The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and
other workers in seven countries in 2004.

The given chart illustrates the number of thousands US dollars paid annually for doctors and other workers in seven different countries: The US, Switzerland, Finland, Germany, Czech, Italy and France in 2004.

Overall, there was the biggest payment for doctors in both seven given countries. The annual pay for other workers in the US was higher than the other countries in the period shown.

In the US, there was the largest payment for doctors at 12000 US dollars which was two-fold Italy’s payment. The amount of dollars paid for doctors in Switzerland and France was nearly similarity at 70000 US dollars while Finland spent 50000 US dollars to pay for doctors which was the lowest payment compare with other countries.

Germany, Czech and Italy had the same payment for other workers at 20000 US dollars while the US paid 45000 US dollars in the same payment. Switzerland spent lower dollars than the US to pay for other workers at 40000 US dollars, however, this payment was bigger than Finland’s payment and France’s payment.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05780346821 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42097873321 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433526011561 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5201515663 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437828524865 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.260375194905 0.103423049105 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106416327158 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331373536301 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830854886236 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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