The line chart illustrates the crime incidents that take place whole doing burglary, car theft, robbery in the inner city over a 9 year period. Theft from the person is named as robbery.
Over all, the highest rate of death issues is done while doing burglary. Then after a certain period of time it goes down and became equal with car theft incidents and then goes decline. At the end of the period the main reason for the incidents are car theft. Robbery is having some fluctuations through out the period from 2003 to 2012.
In NewPort city centre the rate of incidents for burglary and robbery had initiate with about 3400 and 2800 respectively. The highest murder rate for burglary is approximately 3700 in 2004. Then the rate decreases and reached 2200 in between 2006 and 2007. The car theft deaths should remain stable for a 2 year period of time, then after it had some fluctuations and reached the highest of 2800 in 2012. However, the incidents done by car theft had started and ended with approximately 2800.The incidents done by burglary followed a downward trend and reached 1300 in 2012.
People lost their lives by robbery remains some fluctuations and started with 600 in 2003 and reached 900 in 2005 and then starts going down to 500 in 2008. Finally, it reached to 600 in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...le doing burglary. Then after a certain period of time it goes down and became equal with car ...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ft. Robbery is having some fluctuations through out the period from 2003 to 2012. In NewPo...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'initiated'.
Suggestion: initiated
... incidents for burglary and robbery had initiate with about 3400 and 2800 respectively. ...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'initiated'.
Suggestion: initiated
... incidents for burglary and robbery had initiate with about 3400 and 2800 respectively. ...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eaths should remain stable for a 2 year period of time, then after it had some fluctuations an...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...arted and ended with approximately 2800.The incidents done by burglary followed a d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6768558952 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3826633677 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497816593886 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3352146459 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978888110645 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426922259709 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455528713999 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698869329885 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299695771048 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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