The line graph represents the changes of three types of crimes that were taken place in Manchester city center the year between 2003 and 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that over the periods the number of burglaries dipped off, on the other hand, rubbery stabled in a fixed range but after a certain time, the number of car theft increased.
To begin, in 2003, just over 500 robberies happened in the city center which was the least among three, while almost 3500 burglaries and 2300 car theft occurred. In the next year, burglaries rose significantly to 3800, and others also upgraded but not more than 200. From 2004 to 2008, the number of burglaries climbed down gradually from 3800 to 1100, whereas the number of car thefts fluctuated and remained between 2300 and 2000. Moreover, in the first three years robbery jumped close to 1000 and then decreased until 2008 to 500.
After 2008, car thefts continuously increasing and ended at 2700, while the number of robberies had up and down, and in 2012 it went up to 600. In addition, in 2009, though burglaries rose almost to 1500 then rest of the time it almost remained level off at 1400.
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- A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety Therefore some people think that government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits To what extent you agree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70243902439 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28569771389 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8351026265 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13626320882 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617018281194 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747284585031 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961805863682 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089788944637 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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