The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. (pound sterling)
The bar chart compares the cost of consumer goods in two countries: France and the United Kingdom in the year 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.
In general, cars spent the biggest expenses in both two countries. In contrast, perfume had the lowest cost. Another visible trend is that, more people in the UK bought cars, books and camera than people in France. While, the amount of perfume and computers were consumed in greater quantities in France than the UK.
In terms of cars, people in the UK spent £450,000 whereas the French spent £400,000. Similarly, the British paid cost of books more than people in France with £400,000 and £300,000 in turns. The expenditure on camera in the UK was twice as much as that of France, with £400,000 and £200,000 respectively.
The amount of money spent on perfume and computer was higher in France. The expenses paid for computers were approximately £370,000 in France and exactly £350,000 in the UK. Perfume accounted for £200,000 of expenditure in France but under £150,000 in the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fume and computer was higher in France. The expenses paid for computers were approx...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, whereas, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98305084746 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58824899207 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7427174168 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972657165112 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450681525549 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072514534261 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884182045303 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104076304876 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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