The bar chart provides information about attendance in hospital emergency care departments by northern Ireland about age group in the time period December 2016, 2017 respectively.
Overall, at the beginning of period lowest number of attendance was shown by people having less age group, while at the end of the period minimum by higher age group in respective year.
It is Crystal clear that in the year, December 2016 children having 5 year age group showed approximate 66 individuals per thousand population. However, in age group 5-15 trend seem to be decline about 20 person. Moreover, this trend was slightly increased by 35 number of individuals followed by aged 16-44. In age 45-64 number of people dramatically decreased up to 28 in number. Beside it, people age 65-74 showed 25 no of people in the same year. At the end of time period, maximum attendance was notified by the people aged 75 and over (63).
Interestingly, in December 2017, children having age group 5 showed 6.58 number of people while this trend was dramatically declined up to 20 by age group 5-15. In comparison both the year 2016, 2017 respectively showed same attendance by the people undergo are 16-44. Individual having age group 45-64 trend was slightly rose than the year 2016 and this trend reached up to more than 60 at the end of the period having people aged 75 and more than that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
... 5-15 trend seem to be decline about 20 person. Moreover, this trend was slightly incr...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... Beside it, people age 65-74 showed 25 no of people in the same year. At the end ...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'no' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'noes', 'nos'.
Suggestion: noes; nos
.... Beside it, people age 65-74 showed 25 no of people in the same year. At the end ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...declined up to 20 by age group 5-15. In comparison both the year 2016, 2017 respectively s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88085106383 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65118335853 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472340425532 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9086408619 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327834059981 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142708805572 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121278052138 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257967795192 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130205323308 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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