The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates a data analysis which describes the difficulties that the people have to face when they go to stay in different countries.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that in a new place, people in the first age category find it more difficult to make a new friend, while for the next category people finding a new house is the most challenging task. Language is the main problem for older people.
To begin with the age between 18-34 and over 55 people, for the first group 46 percent have to face the challenge of making new friends, while it is less difficult for the latter group. Only 23% of older people find it hard to make a new companion, whereas it is tough for 54% to learn a new local language. Searching for a new living home is a big problem for the former group and 40% have to face it, while in the case of the latter group a small portion has to deal with it.
Turning to the middle age category, a big portion of people 39% in number have to face the problem of finding a living home. In the case of the other two features, almost the same amount of people deal with these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, whereas, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30046948357 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24158615748 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9880587963 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141981456367 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710895524116 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393870372471 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104189191845 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397819486916 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.