The chart illustrates the appearance of eight bird species in Woodchuck County in a year.
All of them can be classified into 2 categories: migratory and non-migratory birds. Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers are consider as non-migratory birds, they settled here permanently for both living and breeding. While the others seasonally appear in Woodchuck County in the summer or winter.
The number of birds species in the summer is 2 times more than that in the winter. There are 7 types of bird can be observed in the summer while only 4 remain in the winter. Only Juncos come here while the others migratory leave Woodchuck County when summer ends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...s. Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers are consider as non-migratory birds, they settled he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03669724771 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79197691424 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.764853702 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128690747689 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753747322291 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738972458138 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122243586715 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846788804315 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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