The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. (Sample answer 2)
The bar chart provides a breakdown of information in terms of what the difficulties which have to be encountered by three age groups when people move to other nations. It is measured in percentage.
It is noticeable that what stands out from the bar chart examines that the most difficult problem for people in the 18-34 age group is making friends, while finding a comfortable place to live is a crucial case for people of 35-54 ages. Standing in contrast, when senior citizens are not likely to master the second languages, this problem does not be a hindrance for young people.
According to the data, there is an obvious fact that elderly people are more likely to make friends than other aged groups. Approximately 23 % of problem in friendships is experienced by people over 55 years old. Aged group 18-34 witnesses by far the largest proportion in this integration problem. However, the second-largest proportion of making friends is held by people around 35-54 years of age.
A closer look at the data reveals that two aged groups, people aged 18-34 and aged 35-54, have an equal percentage of deciding a new place for living, with figure representing roughly about 39 percent for each. In sharp contrast to this, regarding a place for living, population over 55+ shows the lowest percentage of all two aged groups.
A striking point is that only learning the local language is the most problematic for older people, the largest percentage of problem living abroad. On the other hand, other aged groups point out this problem in the lowest proportion for this case.
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this problem does not be a hindrance for young people.
this problem does not to be a hindrance for young people.
learning the local language is the most problematic for older people
learning the local language is the most problematic one for older people
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