The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students stduying six major subjects in a US college in the year 2010
Overall, Finance was the most attractive area of qualification among both sexes, while the opposite was true for Engineering. It is also clear that dramatic differences can be seen in the figures for teenagers of both sexes selecting to enrol in maths
As can be seen from the chart, the number of male students and female counterparts were with approximately 230 students. The figures for Accounting were relatively smaller, with 170 for men and 200 for women. As for Marketing, the survey showed that female were more likely to choose this subject as as their major than male students as this course had about 120 students , which was higher than that of male ones (about 80 students).
Looking at the chart in more detail, the second most popular subject for males was Mathematics with 200 students, compared to nearly 60 students for females. In addition, the number of male students enrolling in economics was 150, which was almost twice as much as female students. It seemed that Engineering was the least attractive course when only 50 female pupils opting for it as their major subject , so as to male pupils
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a US college in the year 2010 Overall, Finance was the most attractive area of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...were more likely to choose this subject as as their major than male students as this...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect as as their major than male students as this course had about 120 students , ...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s as this course had about 120 students , which was higher than that of male ones...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ils opting for it as their major subject , so as to male pupils
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Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... opting for it as their major subject , so as to male pupils
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while, as for, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83568075117 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5725765978 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1470985949 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.142857143 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159733804708 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784098082669 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607981476564 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120523908396 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943867574496 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.