The chart below shows Morocco’s income from different economic sectors in 2003 as well as its income from fishing from 1982 to 2003.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below.

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The chart below shows Morocco’s income from different economic sectors in 2003 as well as its income from fishing from 1982 to 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below.

The table illustrates selling of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries which are UK,Switzerland,Denmark,Belgium,and Sweden.It is measured by millions of euros.

According to the coffee sales,UK dramatically increased it from 1.5 to 20.At the same time,it is obviously seen that Switzerland doubled its sales for this category.Sweden gradually climbed from 0.8 to 1,whereas saw decline about bananas over these years.Switzerland sharply enhanced to 47 millions of euros in 2004,while Denmark's banana sales decreased to 0.9.The second table shows UK had 5.5 times more selling in 2004 than 1999.One of the noticable feature is sweden and Denmark's seriously fell about this type of fruit sales.Overall,according to the both tables,Fairtrade-labelled coffee only saw growth,meanwhile bananas selling also roughly extended except sweden and Denmark.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03937007874 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.63892477189 2.65546596893 175% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708661417323 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 22.4926829268 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.0 43.030603864 558% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.5 112.824112599 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 22.9334400587 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0652997291315 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453777507433 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288142689411 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453777507433 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288142689411 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.2329268293 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.39 61.2550243902 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.3012195122 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.64 11.4140731707 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.06136585366 150% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.9970731707 247% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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