The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives some information about the number of households in five distinct groups of annual income in the United States in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
It is obvious that, there was an upward trend between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000$-99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned between 50000$-74999$ did not change in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
As can be seen, by 2007 the annually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2 million in 25000$-49999$ and then dropped around 11 million between 50000$-99999$ and increase sharply more than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained in different families in less than 25000$ was around to 27 million and has a few increased about 2 million in 25000$-49999$ then fail until 99999$ under 15 million and raised again more than 10 million in in 100000$ or more in 2011. Finally, by 2015 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increased between 25000-49999$ about 1 million decreased sharply 10 million and soar dramatically more than 35 million and reached the peak.
As a result, most of people earning money more than 10000$.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...nd between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 10000...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...5000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ined in different families in less than 25000$ was around to 27 million and has a few ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$99999'.
Suggestion: $99999
...llion in 25000hBc49999$ then fail until 99999$ under 15 million and raised again more ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...n and raised again more than 10 million in in 100000$ or more in 2011. Finally, by 20...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...raised again more than 10 million in in 100000$ or more in 2011. Finally, by 2015 the n...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...5 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...on and reached the peak. As a result, most of people earning money more than 10000$.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10000'.
Suggestion: $10000
... most of people earning money more than 10000$.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95192307692 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81858726521 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3500709452 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.666666667 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114769942543 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861501736611 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967432097717 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107754809414 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112114220098 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.81 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...nd between households earning less than 25000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 10000...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...5000$, 25000-49999$, 75000hBc99999$ and 100000$ or more, whereas the people who earned ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ually income of households in less than 25000$ was 25 million and it increased about 2...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
... than 15 million to under 30 million in 100000$ or more. The annual money that gained i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...ined in different families in less than 25000$ was around to 27 million and has a few ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$99999'.
Suggestion: $99999
...llion in 25000hBc49999$ then fail until 99999$ under 15 million and raised again more ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...n and raised again more than 10 million in in 100000$ or more in 2011. Finally, by 20...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...raised again more than 10 million in in 100000$ or more in 2011. Finally, by 2015 the n...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...5 the number of households in less than 25000$ was approximately 26 million and increa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...on and reached the peak. As a result, most of people earning money more than 10000$.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10000'.
Suggestion: $10000
... most of people earning money more than 10000$.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95192307692 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81858726521 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3500709452 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.666666667 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114769942543 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861501736611 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967432097717 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107754809414 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112114220098 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.81 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.