The chart below shows the number of members talking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to present day

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The chart below shows the number of members talking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to present day.

The table below illustrates the quantity of members participate different sports activities at Santon Sports Club about 30 years old.

Overall, fitness classes and circuit training grew up. Racquet sports has declined for a long time. The last sports is swimming has fluctuated for 30 years.

Firstly, circuit training started about 150 members in 1990. Then, it increased significantly to over 250 members and got the highest point about 300 members at the end of the table. The member of fitness classes have risen since 1990. However, there are slower than circuit training, they have increased about 100 members for 30 years.

On the other hand, racquet sports were the most popular in 1990 and got the highest point at that time. Nevertheless, they decreased rapidly to about 200 members in 1995. After that, racquet sports went down throughout to at the present day. The lasts sport in the table is swimming. It fluctuated in ten years. But the members of swimming increased slightly in 2000 and returned starting point in the present day.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, then, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4483095891 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2472855964 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5714285714 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308655560009 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104345063996 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979598756564 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21201386057 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127058018847 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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