The chart below shows the number of visions for five kinds of tourism attractions in a European city in 1981,1991 and 2001.
this line chart discribed the number of visitors to 5 types of acctactions in a european city in 1981,1991and 2001.these attractions can be devided into two groups according to it's trend.
The first group includes central amusement park,Science park and Central zoo.their visitor number didn't have significent changes in 20 years.number of the visitors to the central amusement park fluctuated slightly around 22million and was raletively larger than the other two.the Science park had visitors of about 7million and visitors to the central zoo always kept smoothly in 5million.
the second group has national park and gallery inside,both of their visitor exhibited a stable growth while the latter had a larger growth rate than former,which started at 7 million in 1981,surpassing former and smoothly reached 20million in 2001.on the other hand the visitors to national park starting at 10 million experienced a relatively slow increase and reached 17 at last.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97545514726 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3952175792 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.666666667 112.824112599 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 22.9334400587 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.23603664747 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094787465955 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921634169938 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978317667436 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921634169938 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978317667436 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 61.2550243902 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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