The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This line chart describes the causes of leaving the residential places located in urban area regarded over a period of 20 years, starting from 1990.
First of all, looking at the group of individuals moving in due to incurring extremely high expense, the collected data had shown a dramatic increase from 1990 to 2000 with a number of roughly 85,000 people in the first year of 2000 decade. However, it tends to decrease to a level of 80,000 people in 2010.
On the other hand, the statistics of leaves seems to witness a different trend in this period in the capital city owing to both suffering the traffic problems and inappropriate lifestyles, which climbed up to 40,000 and 60,000 respectively.
To sum up, despite of achieving the highest level over this period, the number of residents leaving the capital had shown an opposite trend when compared to one moving in as living cost and lifestyle.
- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the causes an 84
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintain world peaces Nuclear power provide cheap and clean energy The benefits of nuclear outwheigh the disadvantage 56
- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the causes an 84
- The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2003 and 2007
- The charts below show the percentage of spending on different areas in the average household in one country in 1910 and 1960 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in the term of demand response, whereas a opposite situation can be seen on the t...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...ta from the accidents on the trips, the most highest number belonged to the transporting by ...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...ta from the accidents on the trips, the most highest number belonged to the transporting by ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...g by demand response, at just above 250 person per 100 million PMT; which was followed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, look, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05809128631 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83134749563 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54356846473 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3318452211 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.375 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148115953421 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069997990231 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420969873791 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964191287741 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220950860802 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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