The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Negi on Thu, 08/08/2019 - 01:25

The bar graph illustrates the rate of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, a graph experienced fluctuating accommodation systems throughout the whole period of time which includes gradual increased in owned accommodation whilst rented accommodation trends was gradual decreased.

Only 22% of citizens preferred to live in owned dwelling whereas in the same year (1918) closely to 80% people's choice was rented dwelling. The most noticeable incident occured in 1939 and 1953, not only owned accommodation but rented accommodation as well, liked proportion remains unchanged. In 1961, the increment in owned dwelling was approximately 10% , in contrast rented accommodation dipped by same rates in comparison to 1953.
Residents of England and Wales were divided into two equal halved in 1971, whose admirable percentage for rented and owned loding is same (50%). Afterward, in 1981, choice of people for owned accommodation slightly increased and reached to 60% however rented housing system lowered to 40% . The preference of owned dwelling was over 60% while rented housing was below 40% between 1991 to 2011.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ommodation systems throughout the whole period of time which includes gradual increased in own...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...9 and 1953, not only owned accommodation but rented accommodation as well, liked ...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in owned dwelling was approximately 10% , in contrast rented accommodation dipped...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ver rented housing system lowered to 40% . The preference of owned dwelling was ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50837988827 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98944553244 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9499582637 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277501190932 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137362099011 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682199579094 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191938327679 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741619826823 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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