The two distinct maps demonstrate the accessibility of road to a city hospital in 2007and 2010.
Overall, there was plenty of changes in road accessibility to city hospital in 2010 by enhancing construction work.
City hospital was surrounded by ring road whose area was bigger than newly modified 2010's hospital.There was car parking area on both side of hospital road not only for hospital staff but also for public.There was no any sign of roundabout in the year 2007. However, bus stop exist in 2007's development which was located in the eastern side of the city hospital.
The size of city hospital was shrunk due to construction of roundabout which consumed certain proportion of area of the city hospital.Furthermore, public car park was shifted very close to hospital while staff car park remained in same place where it was in 2007.The new development came into account at left side of the hospital road as a bus station in 2010 whose presence was null in 2007.By the same token, roundabout also appeared in middle part of the city road which lacks in 2007's city hospital.
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 78
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Essay evaluation report
Need a 'whitespace' after punctuation marks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 189 200
No. of Characters: 884 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.708 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.677 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.559 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 29.102 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.563 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.809 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.256 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hose area was bigger than newly modified 2010s hospital.There was car parking are...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ger than newly modified 2010s hospital.There was car parking area on both side of ho...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... for hospital staff but also for public.There was no any sign of roundabout in the ye...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tal staff but also for public.There was no any sign of roundabout in the year 2007...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h consumed certain proportion of area of the city hospital.Furthermore, public ca...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...roportion of area of the city hospital.Furthermore, public car park was shifted very close...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ined in same place where it was in 2007.The new development came into account at le...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...in 2010 whose presence was null in 2007.By the same token, roundabout also appeare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9402173913 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95031617767 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.26311145 43.030603864 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.8 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221802310061 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168185090955 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102317713157 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200790967498 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870474282089 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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