The chart illustrates the proportion of households owning and renting dwellings in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Renting accommodations was more popular during the first four periods especially in 1918, over 75%, compared with only 21% of owners in the same year. After that, it saw a slight decrease and then remain constant at 69%from 1939 to 1953. The percent of households in rented accommodation continued to decrease until in 2001 and fell to the lowest point at 31%. Finally, it increased back to 36%.
By contrast, there was an opposite trend of households owing. From 1918 to 2001, it saw an increasing patten with the exception of that
it held steady at 31% between 1939 and 1953. In 2001, owning dwelling reached a peak of 69%, and then decreased back to 64% in 2011. However, both of them reached the same level at 50% in 1971.
Overall, people more liked to rent accommodation before 1971 while people preferred to own dwelling after 1971.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58971692738 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0130857171 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275721899452 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104107894384 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131812034257 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17203519191 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152423326244 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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