The chart illustrates the proportion of household owning and renting accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in two places(England and Wales).
Overall, the percentage of households in rented accommodation gradually decreased from 1918 to 2001 and then slightly increased in 2011 compared to 2001. While on the other hand, the proportion of households in owned accommodation steadily decreased from 1918 to 2011 and then there was a little fall in 2011 than previous measurement in 2001.
The chart evidently depict that, the highest percentage of renting accommodation is in 1918 which is around 78 percent, while the lowest is in 2001. Meanwhile, from 1918 it decreased little to 78% in 1939 and remain constant till 1953. Then it gradually fell to approximately 31 percent in 2001 which rose to 36% in later 2011.
Opposite to the renting accommodation, owned accommodation had the lowest proportion in 1918(around 22%) and highest percentage in 2001(around 69%). It rose a little in 1939 and remain stable till 1953 which steadily climb up to the peak in from 1961 to 2001. Later, it fell slightly in 2011 which was about 64%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08648648649 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0026236397 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4483566135 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214753119681 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107843925725 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814696507739 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16662725508 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065758385627 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.