The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households in owning and renting accommodations in England and Wales during the period from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, the percentage of households in owned accommodations had increased in England and Wales from 1918 until 2001 followed by a slight decline in 2011. On the other hand, the proportion of owned accommodations gradually rose until 2001 with a modest drop in 2011. In addition to that, in 1971, the rented and owned households had a proportion of 50% each.
In terms of owning accommodations, the percentage of households rose from about 22% in 1918 to almost 70% in 2001, which is threefold in less than 90 years. From 2001 to 2011 the percentage of households showed a reduction nearing 5%.
With regards to renting settlement, the percentage went down from nearly 77% in 1918 to around 32% in 2001, which represents a reduction of approximately one-third in about 80 years. From 2001 to 2011, however, there was a 5% rise in rented accommodations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of households showed a reduction nearing 5%. With regards to renting settlemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, third, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01183431953 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10291705568 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.645625561 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432238080238 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217536164977 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130424304894 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300230952165 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129700006211 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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