The bar graph illustrates the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in Britain and Wales during 1918 and 2011.
Overall, it is clearly seen that, the demand for rented accommodation declined during the period. Furthermore, the need for owned accommodation rose during the years.
In 1918, almost 80% of the people lived in rented houses, whereas, only above a fifth of the population owned a house. Over the next 35 years, the proportion of rented accommodation gradually decreased, while the figures for owned accommodation steadily increased, and by 1953 the figures were around 70% and 30%.By 1971 both rented and owned accommodation were used by 50% of the population.
However, after 1971, there was an opposite trend in the growth. In 1981, 60% of the people owned their own houses, while the figures for rented accommodation declined to 40%. Over the next 20 years, the proportion of owned accommodation rose to around 70% in 1991 and 2001, before withdrawing to around 65% in 2011. Similarly, during 1991 and 2001 the percentage of rented accommodation withnessed a steady growth, and by 2011 it jumped to around 35%.
- A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety Therefore some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits To what extent do you agree 91
- The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011 61
- The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937 1967 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people Others think education will not work Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...953 the figures were around 70% and 30%.By 1971 both rented and owned accommodatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15957446809 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93786568378 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1233256761 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218970998129 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105860308723 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656554758003 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162966269999 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603385402243 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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