The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart compares the amount of compression of buying or renting houses in England and Wales, near the century period between 1918 and 2011.
Generally, the highest percentage showed rented households accommodation over the years, while the weakest was privete house.
Looking at the details, in first year rented households was raised about 78 percent, while owned households reached approximately 22 percent. Then it levelled of between 1939 and 1953 almost seven in ten. In 1961 and 2001 the amount of rented house decreased dramatically, whereas the figures for private house increased during the period. However, in 1971 that both of this houses were the same level furthermore it was half per cent . In addition, in the last year the convenience of private accommodation went down about two thirds compared to owned house it grew slightly more than a third percent.
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, look, then, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69028168252 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683098591549 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5726816802 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278351234382 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111388837847 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942711868307 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205847631367 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608443945374 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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