The chart below shows the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

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The chart below shows the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014

The pie charts illustrate the differences and changes in the proportion of volunteers provided by six different organizations in 2008 and 2014. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in the percentage of environmental, Sport and Health Care; while the others bucked the trend. Noticeably, the figures of Health Care constantly accounted for the lowest numbers in two years.
In particular, when it comes to Environmental and Sport, the given graph witnessed an increase of about 10% from 21% and 15% to 29% and 25% respectively, which continuously occupied the highest percentages in 2014. Regarding Health Care, the proportion of volunteers remained stable at approximately 8% over the period, which consecutively constituted the smallest figures.
In stark contrast, it demonstrates the opposite trend, the percentage of Art and Education declined sharply by roughly 6% from 18% and 24% to 12% and 17% accordingly. Besides, in terms of other organizations, the proportion stood at 15% in 2008, which outnumbered that in the year 2014 by 5 to 3.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, regarding, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26011560694 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21420549698 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8248791421 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212541338924 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897563085433 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930332308234 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134053609264 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453353950005 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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