This circular chart illustrates the proportions of water consumption in six different countries in the world which are particularly divided by Agriculture, Industrial, and Domestic usage. Among these countries, South Africa is the second country which occupies water usage for Agriculture Lands approximately 81%. Other nations like Africa and South East Asia are almost close to this proportion.
Moreover, the economically risen continents such as South America and Europe use water for domestic purposes which is comparatively higher than all others. Especially, Europe utilizes 53% of water for Industrial use. This makes Europe is the first largest country producing industrial goods all over the world.
Furthermore, North America and Europe are the least usagers of water more or less 13% to 15% for domestic purposes like cleaning vessels, washing cars and, bathing respectively. In addition to that, Central Asia is the first and foremost of all other nations, producing 98% of wheat to the flour companies. Because it is a way of giving respect to the agriculture business. That's why 88% of the water is used for Agro-farms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng 98% of wheat to the flour companies. Because it is a way of giving respect to the ag...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41011235955 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90027511766 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9554043748 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177793921647 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715221755333 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544446166724 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119461760457 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236070409942 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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