Given chart depicts the precentage of residents in Canada who went to four different destinations. The parellel axis of the graph shows the percentages while the perpendicular stands for the variety of places.
Overall, cinema was the most popular sector visited by the all sectors, in contrast, theatre was visited by the least.
Firstly, 55 percentage of the new immigrants went to library and they where the top uses of library,on the otherhands, the other three sectors they were in third position with 50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage theatre respectively.
Secondly, new immigrants from English speaking countries went to the Zoos the most and the other three sector's they stood in second position. Last but the least,70 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were in second position in the other sectors except in library where they fall behind the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: THEY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'were', the simple past of "to be"?
Suggestion: were
...new immigrants went to library and they where the top uses of library,on the otherhan...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...y and they where the top uses of library,on the otherhands, the other three sectors...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d position with 50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage thea...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'zoo' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'zoos'.
Suggestion: zoos
...50 percentage in cinema, 35 percentage zoo and 10 percentage theatre respectively....
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Last but the least,70 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0 percentage of natives, watched movies while they were in second position in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19863013699 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73908382884 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2944646248 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711598316333 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408457739779 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283940631232 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050264548333 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276805535818 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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