The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
Visiting
The chart gives information about the kinds of leisure activity engaged in by three distinct groups:native Australian,new migrants who born in English-speaking countries and new migrants for whom English is not the first language in their country.We will see the how many percentage of places visited by visitor category.
What stands out from the data reveals that cinema was the most popular place among all places and the greatest rate in every location was broken up by different visitor category.To begin with all visitors had common interest in cinema and visitors born in Australia shows the highest attention at virtually 70%.
Nevertheless both cinema and theatre percentage illusyltrate a big difference.The lowest interest of visitors are expressed in theatre rate with only less than 25%visitors.
And also zoo and library had a great interest by visitors.Between 55-50%of the new migrants born in English-speaking countries category hit greatest rate in library location.Its rate in zoo place was slight under the percentage of the library rate.Suprisingly event was that new migrants born in other countris more visited to the library than other two of those visitor category.
Overall the most of people visited to the cinema.And the least percentage of visitor visited to the theatre.Zoo was liked by visitors to have a relax and give emotions.Library was more affective place to visit than zoo.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61607142857 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.53599549185 2.65546596893 171% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.840316868 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 251.6 112.824112599 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8 22.9334400587 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105172227877 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617289939663 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040887173224 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761296866125 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533551209309 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.2329268293 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 61.2550243902 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.