The provided linear graph elucidates the data regarding procedure of waste paper recycling.
Overall, it can be seen that the waste paper recycling process has six steps.
First and Foremost step is to collect waste paper. In this stage,collection all the garbage paper from public paper barks and business. After that, the sorting process begins in which waste paper gets divided into two parts by hand .In first part paper is graded and in second part, unsuitable paper removed. In next step, papers are ready to transport and deliver to it paper mill.
Moving Further, fourth stage is cleaning in which all the papers are cleaned, pulp and also removing all the other material such as staples. After that, De-inking procedure start in this process, the glues and inks are removed from the papers.
Last step is paper making machine. In this stage machine manufacture of unstable paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , collection
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aper gets divided into two parts by hand .In first part paper is graded and in sec...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08783783784 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36377387962 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9756175687 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308898774846 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137172710051 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768759615542 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180594627113 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925787149203 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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