In this contemporary era, the trend of local markets declining day by day due to the increase popularity of supermarkets and local shops should not be fight against these large shops. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will highlight the valid reasons that how it the effects on individuals as well as their plausible solution to improve this situation.
To commence with, nowadays majority of person s are interested in malls where they can obtain everything under one roof.Due to which the local shops are closing day by day and it effects on the middle class people who merely dependents on local shops for purchasing things. Owing of the fact that, they do not have enough money to do shopping in supermarkets as they have numerous responsibilities about their family and children.To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2018 has revealed that 60% of local shops was closed due to opening a supermarkets. As a result, these malls and supermarkets should be opened in those area where there is not local markets and in porch areas.
Furthermore, it has mainly effect on those persons who are the owner of the shops. Because if their shop will be close then how they take care of their family. Local markets owner only fulfill their family needs from shop work. to exemplify, in 2019,it had written in the newspaper that in the coming years the local shops will be diminished by increasing the supermarkets. Therefore, government should give jobs for those individuals who lost their shops to help their family needs.
To recapitulate, closing local markets impacts bad on local communities however, there a number of possible solution which people cannot ignored. Law makers plays a vital role in this problem by providing vacancies for needy people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01013513514 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74891031934 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6989752755 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33909441137 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118649522742 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570072370903 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20543741439 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541028876051 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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