The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
<p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.</p><p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.</p><p style="margin-top: 10px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; font-size: small; white-space: normal;">Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.</p>
- In the past, people spent the entire life doing one job. But nowadays, they change their jobs frequently. Give reasons. 78
- In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 89
- Nowadays computers are widely used in education As a result some people think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72448979592 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80788655293 2.65546596893 143% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.381900383 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.285714286 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263397565753 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126317041236 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601067106698 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263397565753 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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