The bar charts illustrate the distribution of global petrol in different regions and percentages of oil consumped annually in those areas.
Overall, Middle East owns half of the oil deposit in the world; whilst, Asian, America and West Europe combined consume almost 70% of oil production annually.
Looking from the left bar chart, it is evident that Middle East has the most deposition of oil in the globe, which is 56.52%; however, Middle East merely consumes 6.15% of annual oil production. Canada ranks the second place on oil resource; which is 14.84%. By contrast, Canada consumes 2.48% of yearly oil production in the world.
Turning to the right bar graph, it is apparent that Asia consumes the biggest amount of oil, which is 26.21%. However, Asia only has 2.89% of oil deposit. United States and West Europe consume the second and third amount of oil, which is 25.48% and 19.24% respectively. In the similar vein of Asia, these two regions have little oil resource, which is 1.85% and 1.47% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47898433271 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8134679932 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156168305923 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729118596496 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444093684176 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110819140305 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398533128702 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.