You want to sell some of your furniture you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you write a letter In your letter 1 explain why are you selling 2 describe the furniture 3 suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture begin

Dear Eric,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you because I think you may be interested in my furniture that I am going to sell.

You may be wander why am I selling my furinture. Let me explain it for you. As you know, I was perparing for my immigration to Australia. Luckily, all my efforts paid off. I received my vise granting letter last week. I decided to move to sydney next month; therefore, I am selling my furniture.

Since you visited my house several time, you know I have many fine furniture. I am selling a set of table and chairs made from red hard wood, a bed with matress and a study desk made from mahogeny. You complimented on my furniture during you last visit; thus, I considered you first when I was think to sell these furniture.

Please write to tell me if you are interested. You can come and see these furniture anytime you want because I am free these days. Besides, I can offer you a compelling price once you are interested in these furniture.

All the best
Jim Pan

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Average: 6.9 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...urniture. Since you visited my house several time, you know I have many fine furniture. I...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun furniture seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fine furniture', 'a good deal of fine furniture'.
Suggestion: much fine furniture; a good deal of fine furniture
... my house several time, you know I have many fine furniture. I am selling a set of table and chairs...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...thus, I considered you first when I was think to sell these furniture. Please writ...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this furniture' or 'these furnitures'?
Suggestion: this furniture; these furnitures
...ered you first when I was think to sell these furniture. Please write to tell me if you are ...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this furniture' or 'these furnitures'?
Suggestion: this furniture; these furnitures
...ou are interested. You can come and see these furniture anytime you want because I am free thes...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this furniture' or 'these furnitures'?
Suggestion: this furniture; these furnitures
...elling price once you are interested in these furniture. All the best Jim Pan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, therefore, thus, well, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37948717949 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53910895655 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9896833956 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.375 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1875 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338918723036 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129788702716 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837491475047 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243756035284 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493333200583 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.