The carts provides information about the both proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas and the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.
Overall , we observe that the biggest percent of the oil resources is in Middle East , following by Canada , America , Eastern Europe and Africa . By contrast , the proportions of total world annual oil consumption in Asia , United States , Western Europe , Australia and New Zealand are reasonable major than in the other countries .
Firstly , the countries which have slightly different percentage of both world oil resources and annual oil consumption are Eastern Europe with 6.58 and 6.56 , respectively and Central and South America with 8,12 for oil resources and 6.70 for annual consumption . In addition , Asia , United States and Western Europe have similarity in their percent , too . All tree of them have contributed for annual oil consumption bigger percent . Moreover , the difference between Asia and United States in their proportion for the consumption is around 1% and between United States and Western Europe the difference in oil resources is just under 1 % .
Secondly , the biggest proportion of total world oil resources accounted for 56.52 % is in Middle East and the smallest percent is 0,30 in Australia and New Zealand . On the other hand , the biggest percent of total world annual oil consumption is in Asia and the smallest is again in New Zealand .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31718061674 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81266888394 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42731277533 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9315981958 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.111111111 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 1.69756097561 1826% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254973333394 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129433418393 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12570149873 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212312830958 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143592144315 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.